Reflections on story 0.52 alpha

I wrote Story 0.52 Alpha in three parts. The first two parts I really like. It does what I want it to do and I think it flows well. When I put it up, I had to write an ending. I don't like the ending I wrote. It went too geek for what I was aiming at. I decided to go on the ubergeek track and it doesn't mesh with the rest of the work at all.

I will have to give that a second look. I might also extend the story a bit. The piece didn't end up like I wanted, so I will have to fix it.